Friends and Enemies – Discussion
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- 17th July 2011, 8:47 at 8:47 am #129759AnonymousInactive
Hi guys,
I’m writing a book based in the world of Formula One. However, I’m not posting the story in this thread, I’m posting it in one just called Friends and Enemies. This is because i don’t want the story thread to get cluttered, so please only discuss the book here. So this thread is for discussion and not for the story.
Thanks, and I hope you enjoy it.
17th July 2011, 9:13 at 9:13 am #174578Nic MorleyParticipantRead and really enjoyed it. You’ve got some talent. Every sentence just mae me wanting to read more, don’t know but I found it interesting.
Keep up the good work! Lookforward to chapter 2 :)
17th July 2011, 9:18 at 9:18 am #174579AnonymousInactiveHaha fantastic! Thankyou very much and Chapter Two will hopefully be up next week.
17th July 2011, 10:12 at 10:12 am #174580Stephen JonesParticipantlove it! can’t wait to see how khan goes!
17th July 2011, 13:04 at 1:04 pm #174581BasCBParticipantNice Idea, I will have to take some time to read it.
17th July 2011, 19:25 at 7:25 pm #174582Mark-LParticipantAlthough i have read it in school i enjoyed reading it again.
17th July 2011, 19:48 at 7:48 pm #174583EllParticipantVery good Daykind, can’t wait for chapter 2
18th July 2011, 13:04 at 1:04 pm #174584shadow13ParticipantVery good first chapter. Looking forward to chapter 2.
18th July 2011, 14:44 at 2:44 pm #174585Felipe BomenyParticipantGood job, daykind! I look forward to reading the whole piece!
18th July 2011, 14:48 at 2:48 pm #174586AnonymousInactiveThanks for all the nice comments guys! Hopefully chapter two will be up by the end of this week.
18th July 2011, 14:57 at 2:57 pm #174587damonsmedleyParticipantI actually liked it! This Indian sounds a bit arrogant though! :P
18th July 2011, 15:04 at 3:04 pm #174588AnonymousInactiveWhen I saw how long it was I admit I didn’t want to read it :P But as I read the first line I wanted to read on and on until I finished Chapter 1. I agree with Damon Smedley also! Great read!
18th July 2011, 15:14 at 3:14 pm #174589Felipe BomenyParticipant@Damon Smedley
Hey- Naweed may be from Pakistan, Bangladesh, or even the Maldives! It’s possible because there’s already a Paraguayan world champion ;D
19th July 2011, 16:20 at 4:20 pm #174590AnonymousInactiveAt 10.48pm, inside the MET office, Josh Kelly is startled to hear his door smash shut. In it is Pyramid Racing team principal Adam Christensen.
“What the fuck do you think you were doing? You weren’t telling anyone about the deal!”
Oh, this is getting interesting!
Also, wasn’t Kahn from India? Now he’s from Pakistan!
And the Italian driver named Gianluca, you’ve put Allesandro as surname (then misspelled as Allessandro), but just to let you know in Italy there is Alessandro which is a name, and may be a surname.
19th July 2011, 16:27 at 4:27 pm #174591AnonymousInactiveOk, thanks Fixy. I’ll bear that in mind for the nexr chapter.
But I don’t tgink I said what nationality Khan was in 1st chapter, but if I did, then it was a mistake.
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